Down at the bottom of the NYTimes.com web page was a photo of what looked like a tent full of stuff and the following lede:
San Jose Stores Property of Homeless After Sweeps.
Wow, how ambiguous can you get?
If I think it, I might say it. If I say it, i will write it. Some photos, too.
Wednesday, June 20, 2012
occasion musing on email subject lines
Today, catching up with the false positives - Postini flags roughly 20% of the newsletters and other legitimate emails as SPAM and no matter how often I try to train the program, the percentage remains about the same - I got to musing on subject lines.
Here's an example: Learn more about our permanent hair loss solution.
I said to myself, is this an ad for a depilatory? Certainly, the way it's phrased makes it seem like the product is meant to make sure hair you lose doesn't come back. I personally don't care to lose any hair.
Here's an example: Learn more about our permanent hair loss solution.
I said to myself, is this an ad for a depilatory? Certainly, the way it's phrased makes it seem like the product is meant to make sure hair you lose doesn't come back. I personally don't care to lose any hair.
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